Chapter 1

Chapter 1

Chapter 1

Tuesday, 08 March 2022 – 2:25 p.m. MST

 

Though only nineteen, Thomas O’Grady presented himself with a polished charm and an oratory command that impressed and sometimes frustrated the politicians that were his future comrades and rivals. The son of the most powerful senator in the United States congress, his presence always drew the press. Thomas was respected in general, but he was just as likely to be the subject of a teen magazine article focusing on the merits of exfoliating skin creams as an exposition on the up-and-coming American political aficionados.

He stood at the base of the Dreamcatcher ski lift at Grand Targhee, a small, out-of-the-way ski resort in Idaho where he had hoped to avoid the press for just a day.

“How we deal with these issues is at the core of our humanity. While we may debate the ideological, philosophical and spiritual aspects of cloning for decades to come, we must come to action now. We do not have the luxury of eternity to prove these concepts. We are America. We set the standard both technically and ethically. We do now as we have in the past. We have a moral obligation to our past, our present and our future and we must decide and act today,” he finished, looking around the small group of local reporters.

“Mister O’Grady?” a young female reporter began.

“Please. Thomas. Mister O’Grady is my father.”

The group laughed.

“On a lighter note,” she continued, “we understand that you’re dating someone quite seriously now. Any chance we’ll be covering your wedding soon?”

Thomas hated those questions. He knew that being in the public eye would always bring scrutiny, but he never understood how his personal life was important to the media.

He made eye contact with the questioner. “When that day comes, make sure you bring your invitation.” His expression hardened for an instant then relaxed. “I only have two days here. It’s time I got about the business of skiing. You’ll please excuse me.”

Thomas shouldered his skis and expertly crossed the snow, meeting his younger brother Alan and his best friend Mike.

“Anything good?” Alan winked as Thomas arrived.

“Yeah,” he replied, “they asked about the last time I found you trying on mom’s shoes.” Thomas was more sensitive to personal questions lately and he knew it. He worked hard to cover that – it wasn’t in his nature to be frustrated by anyone. Especially not reporters. “Let’s get up there. No press at the top.”

Thomas led the way to the lift. “I love these old lifts. There’s something really exhilarating about being so...”

Thomas felt dizzy. He reached out to level himself and collapsed onto the hard snow. Alan and Mike rushed to his side.

“Tom?” Alan called. “Tom, what’s wrong?” Thomas writhed on the ground. His eyes reflected both fear and intense pain. He grasped the ground in terror as his mind spun in a whirlwind. He called out once, then it seemed he had no voice, no air. He shot forward, grabbed Alan and stared into his eyes.

Help me!” His mind demanded. His body refused to echo the call.

Help me.” Darkness collapsed inward. Silence.

 

* * *

 

Tuesday, 08 March 2022 – 4:25 p.m. EST

 

At five thirty, April knew it would finally be time for the party. Her father had been planning something special for this birthday. She knew it. She could see the excitement behind his eyes every time he spoke of it. He loved a secret and so did she, but now, with her eleventh birthday party just minutes away, April found it impossible to concentrate on anything. She sat over her homework, her pencil lightly dancing over the paper. She hadn’t done a thing.

She stood up. It was impossible to work now. “Maybe I better check my hair,” she thought. She had checked and re-checked. Her hair was perfect. Her clothes were perfect. She was ready for the party.

The door opened in the entrance on the main floor. It closed. April heard footsteps and the familiar muffled sound of her dad’s voice greeting her mom and younger brother.

“Daddy!” she called as she ran down the stairway.

“Who’s that?” came the reply.

“Daddy.” It was her you-know-who-it-is-and-I’m-not-amused voice. “It’s me.”

“Oh, yes, and who are you again?” he played.

“Daddy. Is it time?”

“Time? Time for what?” April’s father looked around.

“Daddy.”

He gave in. In a flash, April was scooped up and locked in a bear hug that only her daddy could endow. “It’s time. Let’s go.”

“Go?” April didn’t expect that. Her birthday party had always been at home. “Can you tell me where now?”

“Hmmmm. Nope. For eleventh birthdays, daddies get to keep everything secret.”

“Please?”

“Let me think about it.” He ran his fingers over his chin, pretending to stroke a beard. “Nope.”

April whined then giggled as she ran past her dad out into the front hallway. “I’ll beat you to the car,” she called back. “Last one in’s a rotten egg.” She twirled around, checking for anyone who might try to pass her up and nimbly bounced toward the front door. She reached up for the door.

Snap. Something inside April changed. She thought she heard a snap, then instantly her arms and legs tingled. April’s momentum continued to carry her forward, though her legs failed and collapsed under her weight. Her arms were useless in stopping her fall as she bounced into the hardwood door.

Somewhere behind her she heard screaming. It was distant, but it sounded like her mom. Someone lifted her head. Daddy!

 

* * *

 

Tuesday, 08 March 2022 – 3:25 p.m. CST

 

Ryland Ortega glided deftly over the ice, focused on the puck just passed to him. His skill on the ice, both as a hockey player and as a skater was known throughout his hometown of Conway. He was the best young player in the area. He was only thirteen years old, but he was taller and a bit bigger then most of the kids his age. He had always been a strong athlete.

“It’s like he senses the puck,” his mom always said when people asked about Ryland. “But he’s not just an athlete. He’s a straight A student, he plays the bassoon, and he’s a great cook.” Katherine Ortega beamed whenever she spoke of her only child.

Ryland caught the puck, positioned and shot.

“Goal!” the announcer called. He was clearly a fan of Ortega. “And Ortega snaps up another point for his team.” Really, the whole town was a fan of Ortega. In fact, most of the opposing team were fans. It was hard not to like Ryland. He was sociable, friendly and simply amazing on the ice.

He noted the praise of his teammates as he made a wide arc back to the opposing goal. Skating was like flying he always said. It made him feel free. Today he was playing as good as he ever had, maybe even better – and he felt it. He caught a glimpse of his mother as he sped down the rink. Instinctively he smiled.

She’s always there,” he thought.

Ryland caught sight of the puck, set up and quickly switched direction. He crouched, lowing his center of gravity and minimize his presence as he moved in to intercept. He sped again, glanced quickly for defenders and dashed in. He grabbed the puck, turned to find his team and passed. Clack. The puck shot across the ice and all eyes followed it to the teammate.

Nobody saw Ryland falter. For the first time that he could remember he couldn’t get his feet under him. The retaining wall rushed toward him as he tried to regain control. It was too late. Every part of Ryland’s body felt numb. His senses dulled. He never felt the collision.

 

Comments

It's pretty funny that the first chapter of the Agency Delta Starts on my Birthday, 3/08 but I'd be 58 years old in 2022. Yikes!!

Title needs work. The reasons you gave for reading your book barely grabbed my attention. It was like walking up to a stranger and saying,"I'm really charming and interesting." and expecting them to just trust you. Also, "the subject of a teen magazine article" does not make me want to read further. All of this did however prompt me to waste two seconds posting this rude comment.

Ugh. Don't listen to D. Although, he makes a good point (subject of a teen magazine article???), he is also hinging quite a stinging critique on one thing. His right, I suppose. Anyway, I also hate the "don't call me mister, that's my father" line. It's very cliche, and I think you could do better. I like this book so far, despite the minor problems. Come to think of it, this book is reminiscent of _Cell: A Novel_ by Stephen King, that just came out.

It's obvious that you're a smart guy, so write something amazing - get crazy, dude!

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