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September 30, 2005

Illustration of Q-Morrow Suite

While I was writing The Agency Delta, I found that I had trouble when referring to objects and locations within the main characters' offices. In one scene a character would enter from the left, in another the right and so forth. The problem was that I had no mental image of the layout of the office.

Thank goodness for talented friends. I asked my good friend Dan to create an office layout for me and he sent me this file. From that point on, I was able to refer to the layout whenever I was developing a scene in the office.

Thanks again, Dan!

Chapter 2

Chapter 2

Wednesday, 09 March 2022 – 6:45 p.m. IST

 

The last sliver of sun faded into the horizon as Sireesha Naidu stood transfixed at her office window. Her view of Bangalore was rivaled by none. It had been her hard work and her effort that afforded this luxurious perspective. As the daylight faded, her office interior lighting adjusted itself automatically. For a brief second, Sireesha caught a glimpse of her reflection in the glass.

Her dark eyes, focused and intense reflected a strength and vitality of youth. Her hands were manicured, her suit perfectly tailored for a figure that made women half her age resentful. She glanced at the reflection of her platinum wristwatch just as the tint of the window reduced to match the lighting and reduce internal glare. She turned her hand to see the watch. Five minutes, she thought.

She walked around the perimeter of her office, an enormous circular space with a full three hundred sixty degree view. The building was entirely occupied by the researchers and staff of Naidu BioGenics, the largest biotechnology and DNA research facility in India. It stood in the center of the Naidu Technical Park, a campus of ultramodern research facilities and manufacturing centers focusing on biotechnology, communications, and computer networking. Sireesha admired the park, but did not indulge in self aggrandizement. Her true goal was still years away from fruition. This development was simply a step along the path.

Moving quickly across the campus from the west, a motorcycle sped toward the central building. Dozens of the Naidu employees stopped to comment on the audacity of this rider. Not only was he completely without safety gear, the volume of the engine indicated a gasoline engine – something rarely seen in this era, especially on one of the most progressive campuses on the planet. Daniel Van Der Merwe was accustomed to the sidelong glances and the disgusted stares. His disinterest in political correctness was rivaled only by his apathy for humankind in general. He revved his bike and continued into the sublevel parking lot.

Sireesha accessed the security systems and traced Daniels movements through the building. He made his way through the external security and walked quickly to the high-speed elevators. His biosecurity implants provided the necessary credentials for access to the elevators.

“Apex,” he flatly instructed the elevator as he stepped inside. Only two people had direct access to the top floor of the building. Daniel was indifferent to the fact that he was one of them. It facilitated his employment, but represented no status in his life. He had no social circles to which this would be impressive.

Sireesha met Daniel at the elevator.

“Is everything in order?” she asked as he stepped out.

Daniel nodded.

Sireesha motioned to one of the wide exterior windows. The window transitioned from fully transparent to opaque, then brightened as a video display. On the display, a British reporter stood before an old building. The caption read Paul Davis: Live in New Delhi. The sound was low, but the reporter appeared to be discussing a recent advance in human cloning research. The building in the background came into focus. The façade of the building was a bit derelict, but the signage was new, Naidu Biolabs, it read.

The camera in the news report panned and the angle widened. It was dark outside, but there was clearly a crowd of protestors shouting toward the media and raising standards condemning human cloning. As the camera moved to focus on the reporter again, a flash burst onto the screen. Instantly the transmission cut to a central newsroom where a stunned anchorwoman stumbled to provide information. In a moment, the feed from New Delhi was restored. A frantic scene appeared. An explosion had ripped through the Naidu lab. The forward third of the building collapsed, fire rushed through the remainder.

Sireesha turned from the display. She turned to Daniel. Her eyes were stone, icy and dark. Behind her the display dimmed and the transparency of the window returned.

“That should catch his attention. The other message has been sent,” she said. No hint of emotion accompanied the statement. “Stay ahead of him.”

“I have some business here first,” Daniel responded. “Then I’ll leave for Durban.”

 

More History of The Agency Delta

I love movies. Great movies, good movies, so-so movies, even bad movies -- I love 'em. When I first started writing The Agency Delta, I wrote it as a screenplay. After completing about half of the screenplay I started reading (which can be dangerous) and I gleaned from that reading that perhaps selling a screenplay would jeopardize the soul of my story. At the same time, I found that the format and style of screenplay writing didn't provide me with the tools to fully express the details of the story, so I changed direction.

I took about six months off between the screenplay and the novel -- mostly because I had lost a great deal of motivation, partially because I was re-thinking some of the characters and the flow of the story. Once I refocused on the writing, though, it really came quickly.

Now as I work to find an agent or publisher, I find myself reconsidering the direction I chose again. Many of my closest friends have read the book now. I have read and re-read it so many times during rewrites and editing. I love the story. The story itself is so fun and intriguing, but I still see it in my mind as a movie. I think it's a good book, but I believe it's a great movie.

I'll continue posting chapters of The Agency Delta online here. Perhaps soon I'll be able to refer you to the web site for the movie. Until then, I keep writing and learning. This morning I read another great Seth's Blog article about persistence.

Keep reading The Agency Delta. Keep commenting.

September 29, 2005

Short Story Available

Science fiction and fantasy are my first love in reading, but I have to say that there is an awful lot of sci-fi and fantasy that I just don't get. Too much of it seems to be so focused on the technology or science or the fantastic elements that the story and the characters take the back seat. I prefer a story that is about characters and people while the genre-specific attributes of the story provide the vehicle for drama.

I recently finished a short story called Semper Nunc which explores some relationships that are interesting to me personally. It is a sci-fi story of just about 4,000 words that I hope to use as a platform for a much larger, more comprehensive story.

You can read Semper Nunc in its entirety here. As always I appreciate your feedback and your questions.

I hope you enjoy reading Semper Nunc as much as I enjoyed writing it.

September 28, 2005

Chapter 1

Chapter 1

Chapter 1

Tuesday, 08 March 2022 – 2:25 p.m. MST

 

Though only nineteen, Thomas O’Grady presented himself with a polished charm and an oratory command that impressed and sometimes frustrated the politicians that were his future comrades and rivals. The son of the most powerful senator in the United States congress, his presence always drew the press. Thomas was respected in general, but he was just as likely to be the subject of a teen magazine article focusing on the merits of exfoliating skin creams as an exposition on the up-and-coming American political aficionados.

He stood at the base of the Dreamcatcher ski lift at Grand Targhee, a small, out-of-the-way ski resort in Idaho where he had hoped to avoid the press for just a day.

“How we deal with these issues is at the core of our humanity. While we may debate the ideological, philosophical and spiritual aspects of cloning for decades to come, we must come to action now. We do not have the luxury of eternity to prove these concepts. We are America. We set the standard both technically and ethically. We do now as we have in the past. We have a moral obligation to our past, our present and our future and we must decide and act today,” he finished, looking around the small group of local reporters.

“Mister O’Grady?” a young female reporter began.

“Please. Thomas. Mister O’Grady is my father.”

The group laughed.

“On a lighter note,” she continued, “we understand that you’re dating someone quite seriously now. Any chance we’ll be covering your wedding soon?”

Thomas hated those questions. He knew that being in the public eye would always bring scrutiny, but he never understood how his personal life was important to the media.

He made eye contact with the questioner. “When that day comes, make sure you bring your invitation.” His expression hardened for an instant then relaxed. “I only have two days here. It’s time I got about the business of skiing. You’ll please excuse me.”

Thomas shouldered his skis and expertly crossed the snow, meeting his younger brother Alan and his best friend Mike.

“Anything good?” Alan winked as Thomas arrived.

“Yeah,” he replied, “they asked about the last time I found you trying on mom’s shoes.” Thomas was more sensitive to personal questions lately and he knew it. He worked hard to cover that – it wasn’t in his nature to be frustrated by anyone. Especially not reporters. “Let’s get up there. No press at the top.”

Thomas led the way to the lift. “I love these old lifts. There’s something really exhilarating about being so...”

Thomas felt dizzy. He reached out to level himself and collapsed onto the hard snow. Alan and Mike rushed to his side.

“Tom?” Alan called. “Tom, what’s wrong?” Thomas writhed on the ground. His eyes reflected both fear and intense pain. He grasped the ground in terror as his mind spun in a whirlwind. He called out once, then it seemed he had no voice, no air. He shot forward, grabbed Alan and stared into his eyes.

Help me!” His mind demanded. His body refused to echo the call.

Help me.” Darkness collapsed inward. Silence.

 

* * *

 

Tuesday, 08 March 2022 – 4:25 p.m. EST

 

At five thirty, April knew it would finally be time for the party. Her father had been planning something special for this birthday. She knew it. She could see the excitement behind his eyes every time he spoke of it. He loved a secret and so did she, but now, with her eleventh birthday party just minutes away, April found it impossible to concentrate on anything. She sat over her homework, her pencil lightly dancing over the paper. She hadn’t done a thing.

She stood up. It was impossible to work now. “Maybe I better check my hair,” she thought. She had checked and re-checked. Her hair was perfect. Her clothes were perfect. She was ready for the party.

The door opened in the entrance on the main floor. It closed. April heard footsteps and the familiar muffled sound of her dad’s voice greeting her mom and younger brother.

“Daddy!” she called as she ran down the stairway.

“Who’s that?” came the reply.

“Daddy.” It was her you-know-who-it-is-and-I’m-not-amused voice. “It’s me.”

“Oh, yes, and who are you again?” he played.

“Daddy. Is it time?”

“Time? Time for what?” April’s father looked around.

“Daddy.”

He gave in. In a flash, April was scooped up and locked in a bear hug that only her daddy could endow. “It’s time. Let’s go.”

“Go?” April didn’t expect that. Her birthday party had always been at home. “Can you tell me where now?”

“Hmmmm. Nope. For eleventh birthdays, daddies get to keep everything secret.”

“Please?”

“Let me think about it.” He ran his fingers over his chin, pretending to stroke a beard. “Nope.”

April whined then giggled as she ran past her dad out into the front hallway. “I’ll beat you to the car,” she called back. “Last one in’s a rotten egg.” She twirled around, checking for anyone who might try to pass her up and nimbly bounced toward the front door. She reached up for the door.

Snap. Something inside April changed. She thought she heard a snap, then instantly her arms and legs tingled. April’s momentum continued to carry her forward, though her legs failed and collapsed under her weight. Her arms were useless in stopping her fall as she bounced into the hardwood door.

Somewhere behind her she heard screaming. It was distant, but it sounded like her mom. Someone lifted her head. Daddy!

 

* * *

 

Tuesday, 08 March 2022 – 3:25 p.m. CST

 

Ryland Ortega glided deftly over the ice, focused on the puck just passed to him. His skill on the ice, both as a hockey player and as a skater was known throughout his hometown of Conway. He was the best young player in the area. He was only thirteen years old, but he was taller and a bit bigger then most of the kids his age. He had always been a strong athlete.

“It’s like he senses the puck,” his mom always said when people asked about Ryland. “But he’s not just an athlete. He’s a straight A student, he plays the bassoon, and he’s a great cook.” Katherine Ortega beamed whenever she spoke of her only child.

Ryland caught the puck, positioned and shot.

“Goal!” the announcer called. He was clearly a fan of Ortega. “And Ortega snaps up another point for his team.” Really, the whole town was a fan of Ortega. In fact, most of the opposing team were fans. It was hard not to like Ryland. He was sociable, friendly and simply amazing on the ice.

He noted the praise of his teammates as he made a wide arc back to the opposing goal. Skating was like flying he always said. It made him feel free. Today he was playing as good as he ever had, maybe even better – and he felt it. He caught a glimpse of his mother as he sped down the rink. Instinctively he smiled.

She’s always there,” he thought.

Ryland caught sight of the puck, set up and quickly switched direction. He crouched, lowing his center of gravity and minimize his presence as he moved in to intercept. He sped again, glanced quickly for defenders and dashed in. He grabbed the puck, turned to find his team and passed. Clack. The puck shot across the ice and all eyes followed it to the teammate.

Nobody saw Ryland falter. For the first time that he could remember he couldn’t get his feet under him. The retaining wall rushed toward him as he tried to regain control. It was too late. Every part of Ryland’s body felt numb. His senses dulled. He never felt the collision.

 

Publishing

More books were released in 2004 than ever before. In fact there were approximately 195,000 new books released in 2004. The question for the aspiring author related to that statistic is obviously, "How do I get my book in front of readers?"

I've been working on that a lot lately. The answer may simply be, "It depends."

It does depend on whether you're writing fiction or non-fiction. It depends on the genre of the book, the demographics of the target audience and such things as distribution and marketing.

Some Background about Me
I have had three books published in the past. The first was published by the McGraw-Hill Companies in early 2001. It's a PHP programming book so it appeals to about 37 people worldwide. In this case McGraw-Hill approached me. They had a title, a concept and an outline for the book when I was called. They just needed a writer.

My next two books are self-published by a fantastic print-on-demand company called Lulu Press. I wrote the books, uploaded the text and the cover art, then began the process of marketing the book. Again, these are PHP-related programming books, so I simply had to contact the 37 interested people and let them know the book was available. Sales exceeded expectations and all was well.

Back to the Story
Fiction, however, is a whole different beast. Fiction lives or dies on marketing, spin, buzz (whatever you like to call it) and a whole lot of that is done by the publishers or agents of the publishers. Fiction writers traditionally write their manuscript before approaching a publishing agent. Fiction writers don't contact publishers directly (at least that's the accepted wisdom) because publishers are already too busy. Agents should be queried to determine if they are interested in a title before the manuscript is sent. From my experience, agents are also very busy and so they read query letters looking for very specific criteria to determine whether they might be interested in actually reading a manuscript.

If you happen to find an agent that is interested enough to respond positively to a query letter, the next step is generally to send an outline and the first several chapters of the manuscript. The problem is that if the query letter doesn't work, the manuscript will never be requested. The query is a marketing letter, not a novel, so I believe it requires a totally different writing style and personality than any novel. Therefore I believe that it stands to reason that there are many great books seeking agents that never get in the door because the writer doesn't write marketing material well.

On the other hand, if 195,000 titles were published in 2004, it may simply be that there is too much material in general. In that case perhaps the only way to break into publishing is to know someone and obtain a referral to an agent or publisher. Maybe it is all about who you know...

What's This All About?

This blog/blook is an experiment of sorts. Over the course of the past two years I have been writing a book called The Agency Delta. It is a completed work (save for some editing) and I have been in the process of publishing for several months now.

This blog/blook was inspired by conversations that I have had with some close friends in marketing, some recent information that I have found on this crazy thing we called the world wide web and just a general curiosity about blogging.

To be completely honest, this morning as I sit down to explain what I'm trying to accomplish, I'm not even sure that I know. Primarily I want to see about this thing that's currently being called viral marketing. Perhaps by blogging/blooking a buzz about this book and this concept will grow. Perhaps if there is a buzz, there will be a market, and perhaps if there is a market, there will be a publisher. If you build a better mousetrap...

So, here I am early in the day of 28 September 2005 tossing a message in a bottle out to the world. I'll be reporting on progress, providing experience and continuing to post the blook until I figure out what it is that I'm actually doing.

September 27, 2005

Prologue

Prologue

Prologue

Monday, 05 June 1995 – 8:48 a.m. MST

 

Quinn arched back away from his desk to stretch out. His fingers played quickly across the keyboard. He smiled. His first real job. He had graduated from Arizona State University in the spring of 1995. It had taken much longer than he had planned to get through his bachelor’s degree. He glanced up at the graduation card from his good friend, Bob. Congratulations! It read. You did it in just three terms – Reagan, Bush and Clinton!

He smiled again. He had interviewed at dozens of companies and had been offered four different jobs. It really was the job market he had hoped for. He finally settled on a small startup in Phoenix called AccuTel switches, a company specializing in high-speed networking equipment poised to take on the giants in the industry. Quinn knew that within a few short years his stock options would be worth millions, maybe more, and he was ready for it.

“Quinn, you’re needed in the conference room in ten minutes,” sounded the voice of the secretary over his desk phone. He lurched up instinctively, a little startled to be pulled out of his reverie.

“Thanks,” he called back, not completely sure if he could be heard. He pulled up his calendar and confirmed. He was expected to present his ideas for a better algorithm for packet loss identification and retransmission. He marveled at how fortunate he was to be able to make such a critical presentation to the whole company being so young. It was that which interested him the most about working for such a small company.

He glanced at his email inbox. It was cluttered and disorganized. Already a hundred new messages awaited response or categorization. “Spam”, he thought. His email reflected his generally disheveled manner in life. His small office was completely unorganized. Boxes of personal items still awaited unpacking. A small collection for the recycle bin formed behind his desk phone. The only time he had apparently spent in his office was to hang his authentic Revenge of the Jedi movie poster – one of the few – and to arrange a small Darth Vader diorama on his bookshelf.

No time like the present¸ he mused as he began opening his new email. Spam, spam, company, he thought to himself as he categorized items. Spam, spam, spam, Definitely Spam, he continued. Spam. He paused. He stared at the message for a moment.

 

To: qsorensen@sorensenaz.com

From: kbutler@worldcto.net

Date: Thu, 16 Dec 2004 23:38:23 -0000

Subject: Re: Interview

 

Mr. Sorensen,

 

Thank you for your quick response. I would be happy to meet with you after the holidays. My schedule is relatively free in the first week of 2005. I suggest meeting on Tuesday, the 4th of January. Please confirm this time with my secretary as usual.

 

Sincerely,

Kevin Butler

Managing Editor

World CTO Magazine

 

To: kbutler@worldcto.net

From: qsorensen@sorensenaz.com

Date: Tue, 14 Dec 2004 15:21:23 -0700

Subject: Interview

 

Dear Mr. Butler,

 

Since we have worked together in the past, I thought you might like to do a piece on our forthcoming product release -- a breakthrough in technology that will certainly interest your readers.

 

I’ll fill you in on the details if you like, but I’m sure with your connections you already have a good idea what we’ve been working on.

 

Quinn

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Quinn looked at the message for a moment longer. He began to drag the message into the trash bin. He paused then copied it into his personal folder. His calendar beeped, indicating that his presentation was about to begin.

 

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